Some notes, before Chapter 12...

1- I agree that Chapter 11 shares in total peanut (not even since this chapter in fact but recently... I felt it well that the plot wasn't super cool finally for a first volume...) I hope to make it up to the next tome.

2- However I recall that: A) it is before-all of fanfiction, this story, and B) there are inconsistencies, I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW, whether voluntary or not (basically I draw and I see after that's shit) but must not forget that it's a dream (NO SPOIL).

3-I know it speaks a lot, I would try to do better soon.

4- I know that I'm absolutely not good at drawing hands and feet, and that sometimes arms and legs are too short but what do you want, I have so little often drawn this before.... I'm going to say it's a drag.

5- About 70% of what I have drawn in this tome I have never done before. So this is a first for me... There are scenes I've never drawn before and it's been HARD to do... (especially concerning the original page 73...)

6- I noticed that I had Karen react a little strangely sometimes, despite me... She actually goes from anger to sadness the opposite... She changes feelings very easily... Hum... How to say... I know it's a little stupid, as a concept... But let's say that A) * Sing with Me * Pretext plooot!! Nope, more seriously, it's true that it makes things easier for me and B) It's a a little like me, I can pass very easily from one emotion to another...

7- I saw that sometimes I made a head too small to Karen compared to the shoulders (sometimes too wide)... I hate myself, damn it! F*CK!!  Why I realize always too late my bullsh*ts?????!!

*cough* Yes well, I finished my usual monologue. Appointment for the next chapter that will close the volume 1... And for the cut scene!